Developmental Editing Service

What is developmental editing?

Developmental editing–also called story-craft editing–evaluates the strengths and weaknesses of how a story is crafted. Developmental editing takes into consideration the author’s unique voice and writing style and works within it. The editor does not rewrite the work, but makes specific suggestions as to how the author can strengthen all aspects of the story to reflect what they’re trying to say in the most compelling way.

Examples of what is covered by developmental editing:

  • Plot inconsistencies
  • Characters who may be underdeveloped or whose actions aren’t quite believable
  • Structural weaknesses
  • Inconsistent point of view

In other words, developmental editing is a general critique of what’s working and what isn’t.

The developmental edit takes place when the story is perhaps in its second draft and the author needs some professional input. It is not a line edit or proofreading, but an overall view of the writing.

Who is it for?

Developmental editing is for anyone looking for professional feedback on their writing.

I specialise in working with independent writers of genre fiction but also enjoy literary fiction. Some of my favourite genres include: mysteries, thrillers / psychological thrillers, “women’s fiction”, suspense / crime fiction, magical realism and light fantasy, historical fiction (also, historical fantasy), family sagas, memoir, coming of age stories, travel writing and world fiction (I especially love stories which feature characters from diverse backgrounds). If you’re not sure if your work fits into one of these categories then please do not hesitate to contact me and we can discuss it.

What does the editor do?

First, I quickly read through the entire story to get a feeling for the pace, tone and whether or not it would engage a reader, highlighting anything which particularly stands out to me.

Then I spend time reflecting on my reading experience. This includes making notes on the characters, plot, story structure etc to help me work out which areas need the most attention when it comes to my second read.

During my second read I praise what’s working and make respectful comments about what isn’t.  This is the developmental edit and involves detailed notes on the manuscript itself, using the comments feature of MS Word. Where possible, I give specific advice and guidance as to how the work can be strengthened.

At the end I prepare a detailed critique, tying my comments together and including notes on the story, structure, premise, character development, setting, use of dialogue and narrative voice. I summarise what’s working and not working and give concrete examples as to how any problems might be remedied. This is the revision letter and will focus on the main areas which, if strengthened, would serve to bring your manuscript to the next level. In some cases, it may be beneficial to undergo more than one round of developmental editing.

What does the author do?

After you receive the editing notes, it is up to you to decide whether or not to make any or all of the suggested changes. If you do, you then go back and rework those sections of the manuscript.

What will it cost?

As each project is unique, I offer a bespoke editorial service, quoting on each job based on a submitted sample of the work. The initial consultation—where we discuss your project’s requirements and whether or not I can meet your preferred time frame—is free and with no obligation.

How long will it take?

That depends on what is required and will be discussed at consultation stage.

Please note that I aim to respond to initial enquiries within two business days.

How does an author choose the right editor?

Each editor brings different strengths and experience to the developmental edit. As a published author, I understand what it’s like to be on the receiving end of feedback. I put myself in your shoes and always work within your style, spending time getting to know the qualities of your writing, and discovering how best to strengthen your work in a way that allows your unique voice to shine through.

In addition to being published, I have the following experience and qualifications which give me a unique insight into the story-crafting process:

How can I book the service?

You can contact me by email in the first instance: kendraroseolson@gmail.com.
Please note that this service is subject to availability.